Alright. So after countless of hours of work and many sleepless nights put into finishing my animatic/storyboards for my senior film...I want to change it. As of right now, I don't think that I want to run with a completely different story. If possible, I would like to just spend the extra time and effort in revamping my art direction, timing, and plot points so that I can make this film as strong as possible.
In order to do this, I would really appreciate it if all you readers would critique my animatic! Tell me what you like and dislike, what feels really awkward to you, and what should be thrown out completely. The more honest your opinions are, the more I can work on improving my film!
If anything, I would like most of the focus to be on the ending. I pretty much threw it together during finals week, but looking back on it now...I'm not too happy with it. What do you think would make a better ending? OR do you like it the way it is? Am I just overthinking this too much??
You guys are so great! I can't wait to hear what you all have to say!